Sunday, January 20, 2008

La La Land...


Beneath the crimson rays of the burning zone
There,he begins his journey,all alone..
Climbing over the dunes spangled with ipomea,on the seaside..
The soft morning light he enjoys,while on his ride..
Birds flying out of the casuariana tree..
All seem to tell him,they've the power to be free..
Flute-voiced drongoes,cutting through the air..
Frisking and flirting,giving a blue-black glare..
And there he stops by a pond,with a dirty stare..
Seeing women giggling as they send up showers of water,wondering..what a bond they share!
The lane becomes dusty and rutted now..
And comes along a Magic Man with his trumpet and the pious cow..
His magenta turban struggling to shine in all that dust..
And he wears a look,as if protesting for his life oh-so-unjust.
Oh! There he is riding beneath the girdle of pearls,to understand..
the mysteries of love and life,in the Never never Land..

6 comments:

A twisted soul said...
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Soul Less Curry said...

And as he ventured into the alleys unknown..
unrelenting, fearless he walked alone..
stopped he was by the sight of a tiny hood..
it was a little girl lost in the wood..

She lifted her eyes and said with a smile..
Loving is to give & to love is life..
with that she disappeared in the realms of sand..
Leaving him perplexed in the La la land..


:D Okay, this wasn't to tell you how I suck at poetry but to tell you how beautiful you are at it.
Just see the clear difference and forgive my baloney. :D

Lovely!!

Anonymous said...

oh beautiful! :)
Captivating..
Gets your imagination on forefront, takes you for an odyssey, to a place far away from the hustle bustle of the country side, the vast panaroma of emotions deciphered and demonstrated in a mesmering way!
color personified..!!
wonderful,

kp up the good work ('',)
''a novice in blogosphere''

Winnie the poohi said...

hey baby!!

>:D<

beautiful is ur imagination...

kirtan said...

were u talking about sun :O :P

lost track..
why did u name it la la land :-?

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